er's block.I want to write a novel about the Greek God's based on the perspective of a made-up Goddess, the daughter of the God Apollo and the Goddess Nike would you read this? Any comment's ideas? Thanks I appreciate it!
Sorry if i use apostrophe's incorrectly. I'm only 12.
Here's a paragraph-

The dark-haired girl swiftly moved about the forest, hiding quietly from the dark shadows that followed her. The only sound was the blowing wind, that barely rustled her hair. She smiled as the shadow's slowed. Her smile was short-lived, the shadow's split up and it was clear what they were. Artemis and her follower's. Violet felt dissapointed, she was sure that this time, she had at least annoyed a worthy opponent. Not that her firey-tempered aunt wasn't a worthy opponent.

I know it has grammer and other mistakes
The Greek Goddess Nike is the goddess of victory, hence the company. I think i might have her and violet hating each other, making Violet fail at everything she does. But i really don't know. Any ideas?

The paragraph was just written off the top of my head, just needed to explain it more. Thanks!
The Greek Goddess Nike is the goddess of victory, hence the company. I think i might have her and violet hating each other, making Violet fail at everything she does. But i really don't know. Any ideas?

The paragraph was just written off the top of my head, just needed to explain it more. Thanks!
The Greek Goddess Nike is the goddess of victory, hence the company. I think i might have her and violet hating each other, making Violet fail at everything she does. But i really don't know. Any ideas?

The paragraph was just written off the top of my head, just needed to explain it more. Thanks!